The only thing standing between this story/art combo and perfection is a thorough homonym/grammar check. It distracts a bit from what is otherwise a lovely piece that conveys atmosphere, depth, bonds, and ambivalence.
I particularly appreciate that time isn't wasted setting up who this team is, how they first contacted the planet, etc. It was especially respectful of the beautiful art by focusing on John's POV and his relationship with Rodney just being a background fact.
It's a shame the show's creators gave the character of John so much to be burdened by, but never delved into the results. We were told time and again that he was reckless and suicidal, but it came across as devotion. The closest we as viewers came to seeing the true impact of all that has happened was the episode with the fake Koyla in the final season.
My point is that this story, inspired by such a fantastic piece of art that highlights, well, light, fills that void. Illuminates a bit a Sheppard for us.
Thank you both for sharing this with us.