Love the colors and style of the art. Really gives the feel of fantasy and action. Perfect fit for the story.
Great use of the time dilation field. Entrancing world Rodney was swept into. Nice world, detail and characters you've created. Perfect declaration of love by the boys! Glad John finally faced his feelings, though it took losing Rodney to do it. Wonderful image of the two in bed. Especially loved your beginning and ending paragraphs. Poor Rodney, not a morning person but now he's got something else to do before stubbing his toe.
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Love the colors and style of the art. Really gives the feel of fantasy and action. Perfect fit for the story.
Great use of the time dilation field. Entrancing world Rodney was swept into. Nice world, detail and characters you've created. Perfect declaration of love by the boys! Glad John finally faced his feelings, though it took losing Rodney to do it. Wonderful image of the two in bed. Especially loved your beginning and ending paragraphs. Poor Rodney, not a morning person but now he's got something else to do before stubbing his toe.
Great job on both the art and fic.