Gorgeous artwork. Love the colors and the team flying, especially Rodney hanging on for dear life. The story really takes off from this picture.

Magnificent story! Love the world you built, with such detail of the surroundings, the inhabitants and the general feeling of peace to angst and sorrow and then relief. Great set up with the crash, the h/c and the mystery of what happened. Very compelling story as you revealed more of the secrets of J'hyla and made us care about Wesli, Tooz, Rast and all the Hylan. Very scary when the Wraith invaded and sad when they were prepared to die rather than leave their children. Adore the background and history you gave to the Hylan.

Love the team here. The team love, concern and loyalty were evident throughout. Enjoyed Rodney bravely volunteering for the ritual and passing the test. Nice look into his psyche as he revealed he regretted not loving more. Yet at the end, we see how much team love exists, particularly between John and Rodney. So happy to see that bond, even if they don't say it out loud. Perfect ending as they soared on the Hylan with Rodney riding with John and squeezing him as he screamed going airborne.

Fabulous story and art.