The artwork is fabulous! I keep looking at it and finding more fascinating details. It's so rich, I'm surprised at how much ended up in the story. Really love the costumes and John's long hair.

The story is so exciting! I would have been happy with a fantasy story, but I'm thrilled that you made this a canon based AU. I can see this Atlantis evolving after being cut off from Earth for so long. The story itself is a fun and suspenseful read. Really enjoyed it.