oh wow, thanks so much for the great feedback =D =D

I'm happy the story worked for you and particularly that you liked Yemir and Turly! I'm always a bit nervous writing OCs. the art was so inspiring, I kept thinking of new things to add until it grew and grew. glad it was entertaining and that you liked all that. Team love (and the John/Rodney love) was important for me, so it's awesome you enjoyed!

thank you again for taking the time to make this great comment, it's deeply appreciated :)