Stunning art! The colors are rich and striking, love the light shining on Teyla. John is strong and gorgeous. Rodney's clothing fit the scholar as he concentrates on the scroll. Nice touch with the schers/horses in the corner. So beautiful and fits hand in glove with the story.

The story is entertaining and wonderful. Great detail and world building. Your original characters are well developed and likable, particularly Yemir and Turly. Enjoyed the strength and comfort of the Atlanteans as they have no contact with Earth and are good for it. John and Rodney were awesome, love the open relationship, the trust between them and of course, the snark and love. The schers and riding contest were very cool. Liked the contests, the gladiator type setting and especially the surprising ancient dagger. The fire and reactions were fantastic. John winning, Teyla jumping in his arms, inviting Turly to Atlantis, Rodney demanding to see Teyla and John and finally, team love were the perfect ending.

Great job on the art and the fic. Much love for both.